tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-993967622929671993.post8495735840427499262..comments2023-10-28T03:29:40.531-07:00Comments on I Am Yula: The Laws of Physics in an Animation Universe.Paul Yulahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18390636211735796207noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-993967622929671993.post-72737315584842936422009-10-18T15:31:59.408-07:002009-10-18T15:31:59.408-07:00I've not seen this movie but from reading your...I've not seen this movie but from reading your paper I've put it into my Netflix queue. You picked some good examples of unrealistic mechanics and while your use of physics terminology isn't always correct (confusing concepts of force, momentum, and energy) your general observations are spot on. One that I particularly liked was that you point out that the recoil of a person shooting a bullet from a gun should be similar to the recoil of the person being struck by the bullet. Finally, your photos helped to clarify for me the scenes you were describing, which was especially useful since I've not yet seen the movie. <br /><br />Score: 105 points<br />Introduction and Conclusion 20<br />Main Body 25<br />Organization 15<br />Style 20<br />Mechanics 25<br /><br />The grading rubric is on the course website at the bottom of the "Grading" page.Alejandro Garciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07485678590987894434noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-993967622929671993.post-37615321332540271482009-10-14T09:23:01.278-07:002009-10-14T09:23:01.278-07:00This is just to certify that you completed and pos...This is just to certify that you completed and posted your term paper. Later, when I have more time to read it carefully, I'll write specific comments and score it.<br /><br />PS Thanks for pointing out the earlier link; I might have missed it otherwise.Alejandro Garciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07485678590987894434noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-993967622929671993.post-27655679268264463112009-10-14T03:58:16.755-07:002009-10-14T03:58:16.755-07:00I've made an earlier post with images and Outl...I've made an earlier post with images and Outline deviation summary.<br />Check "Older Posts" link.Paul Yulahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18390636211735796207noreply@blogger.com